{"id":1832,"date":"2020-10-18T22:10:12","date_gmt":"2020-10-18T20:10:12","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/?p=1832"},"modified":"2020-10-19T08:25:15","modified_gmt":"2020-10-19T06:25:15","slug":"pis-ako-brautigan-2-cast-tvorive-pisanie-k-teme-metafora-a-prirovnanie","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/?p=1832","title":{"rendered":"P\u00ed\u0161 ako Brautigan &#8211; 2. \u010das\u0165 (tvoriv\u00e9 p\u00edsanie k t\u00e9me Metafora a prirovnanie)"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image size-large is-style-default\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"377\" height=\"212\" src=\"https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/wp-content\/uploads\/20130811_152405_20130811165140688.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-414\" srcset=\"https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/wp-content\/uploads\/20130811_152405_20130811165140688.jpg 377w, https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/wp-content\/uploads\/20130811_152405_20130811165140688-300x168.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 377px) 100vw, 377px\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p><em>Zadanie<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u201eNebolo to a\u017e tak\u00e9 hrozn\u00e9: bol jasn\u00fd a tepl\u00fd jesenn\u00fd de\u0148. Spolu so mnou st\u00e1la na zast\u00e1vke aj jedna star\u0161ia pani. Ako sa hovor\u00ed, celkom v\u0161edn\u00e1 situ\u00e1cia. Mala so sebou ve\u013ek\u00fa kabelku a biele <strong>rukavi\u010dky, ktor\u00e9 jej priliehali na ruky<\/strong> <strong>ako zeleninov\u00e9 \u0161upky<\/strong>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Popri n\u00e1s prefr\u010dal \u010c\u00ed\u0148an na motorke. Trocha ma to zasko\u010dilo. Nikdy predt\u00fdm som si toti\u017e nepomyslel, \u017ee aj \u010c\u00ed\u0148ania m\u00f4\u017eu jazdi\u0165 na motork\u00e1ch. Niekedy je skuto\u010dnos\u0165 tak\u00e1 priliehav\u00e1 ako <strong>zeleninov\u00e9 \u0161upky na ruk\u00e1ch tej starej d\u00e1my<\/strong>.\u201c (Richard Brautigan: Star\u00fd autobus)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>V\u0161imli ste si to? Brautigan najprv pou\u017eije prirovnanie: geni\u00e1lne, origin\u00e1lne, vtipn\u00e9, bl\u00e1zniv\u00e9, \u010dudn\u00e9, chor\u00e9 at\u010f., v z\u00e1vislosti od vkusu \u010ditate\u013ea&#8230; Nesk\u00f4r s rovnak\u00fdm n\u00e1padom pracuje ako s metaforou. Aj takto vytv\u00e1ra fantastick\u00fd svet svojich poviedok.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Nap\u00ed\u0161te prozaick\u00fa miniat\u00faru, v ktorej napodobn\u00edte tento Brautiganov postup.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>Rie\u0161enie<\/em> <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Tmav\u00fd les<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Kr\u00e1\u010dal som po vychodenom chodn\u00edku, ktor\u00fd ma viedol tmav\u00fdm, a\u017e nepr\u00edjemne tich\u00fdm lesom. V tme mi vysok\u00e9, \u0161t\u00edhle <strong>stromy<\/strong>, takmer nebadate\u013ene tancuj\u00face v no\u010dnom v\u00e1nku, <strong>pripom\u00ednali obrovsk\u00e9 stono\u017eky<\/strong> a ich kon\u00e1re pokryt\u00e9 ihli\u010d\u00edm zrazu vyzerali ako desiatky pohybliv\u00fdch chlpat\u00fdch n\u00f4h. Stono\u017eky boli nekone\u010dn\u00e9, ich t\u00fd\u010diace sa hlavy nebolo pre tmu vidie\u0165\u2026 Alebo azda naozaj nemali konca? <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Dal som sa do behu. Ka\u017edou sekundou som mal silnej\u0161\u00ed pocit, \u017ee ich dlh\u00e9 kon\u010datiny sa st\u00e1le viac a viac pribli\u017euj\u00fa. Drsn\u00e9 k\u00f4rovit\u00e9 tel\u00e1 ma chc\u00fa za ka\u017ed\u00fa cenu dolapi\u0165. Av\u0161ak <strong>stono\u017eky sa nemuseli nam\u00e1ha\u0165<\/strong>. Vz\u00e1p\u00e4t\u00ed som sa toti\u017e potkol, narazil priamo do jednej z nich a upadol do bezvedomia&#8230; <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>(Jakub Pola\u010dok, 1. A 2020\/2021)<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Zadanie \u201eNebolo to a\u017e tak\u00e9 hrozn\u00e9: bol jasn\u00fd a tepl\u00fd jesenn\u00fd de\u0148. Spolu so mnou st\u00e1la na zast\u00e1vke aj jedna star\u0161ia pani. Ako sa hovor\u00ed, celkom v\u0161edn\u00e1 situ\u00e1cia. Mala so sebou ve\u013ek\u00fa kabelku a biele rukavi\u010dky, ktor\u00e9 jej priliehali na ruky ako zeleninov\u00e9 \u0161upky. Popri n\u00e1s prefr\u010dal \u010c\u00ed\u0148an na motorke. Trocha ma to zasko\u010dilo. Nikdy &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/?p=1832\" class=\"more-link\">Pokra\u010dova\u0165 v \u010d\u00edtan\u00ed: <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">P\u00ed\u0161 ako Brautigan &#8211; 2. \u010das\u0165 (tvoriv\u00e9 p\u00edsanie k t\u00e9me Metafora a prirovnanie)<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-1832","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1832","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=1832"}],"version-history":[{"count":18,"href":"https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1832\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1857,"href":"https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1832\/revisions\/1857"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=1832"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=1832"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=1832"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}