{"id":1195,"date":"2014-11-03T18:51:04","date_gmt":"2014-11-03T16:51:04","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/?p=1195"},"modified":"2020-10-18T23:11:55","modified_gmt":"2020-10-18T21:11:55","slug":"o-ciernej-kronike-ktora-potesila","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jurajsabol.sk\/?p=1195","title":{"rendered":"O \u010diernej kronike, ktor\u00e1 pote\u0161ila (tvoriv\u00e9 p\u00edsanie k t\u00e9me Vo\u013en\u00fd ver\u0161)"},"content":{"rendered":"

\"20130811_152405_20130811165140688\"Je tu \u010das stu\u017ekov\u00fdch, ku ktor\u00fdm neodmyslite\u013ene patria kr\u00e1tke liter\u00e1rne \u00fatvary zvan\u00e9 \u010dastu\u0161ky<\/em> alebo \u010dierna kronika<\/em>. Typick\u00e1 dne\u0161n\u00e1 \u010dastu\u0161ka<\/em><\/a> vyzer\u00e1 asi takto: Na ka\u017ed\u00e9ho \u00fasmev hod\u00ed,<\/em> \/ v lete, v zime v sukni chod\u00ed.<\/em> \/ Z blond na \u010diernu zmenila sa,<\/em> \/ neubudla jej t\u00fdm kr\u00e1sa.<\/em> \/ Ru\u0161tinu m\u00e1 v mal\u00ed\u010dku,<\/em> \/ nadpis Russia na tri\u010dku.<\/em> \/ Diplomatkou sa chce sta\u0165,<\/em> \/ chyby vl\u00e1dy napr\u00e1va\u0165.<\/em> \/ Ide\u00e1lom v\u0161etk\u00fdch chlapcov je, \/\/ <\/em>ke\u010f sa na\u0161a Ivka usmeje…<\/em><\/p>\n

Zdru\u017een\u00fd r\u00fdm, sylabizmus, banality zo \u017eivota spolu\u017eiakov… Pripom\u00edna to po\u00e9ziu niektor\u00e9ho zo \u0161t\u00farovsk\u00fdch epig\u00f3nov \u010di detsk\u00fa riekanku. A pr\u00e1ve autorov tak\u00fdchto ver\u0161ov by som v nasleduj\u00facich riadkoch r\u00e1d in\u0161piroval (v \u017eiadnom pr\u00edpade nie karhal!). Pozrite sa, ako \u00falohu nap\u00edsa\u0165 nie\u010do vtipn\u00e9 do \u010diernej kroniky<\/em> zvl\u00e1dli minuloro\u010dn\u00ed \u0161tvrt\u00e1ci Dominika \u0160alamonov\u00e1, Ema Kalensk\u00e1 a Jaroslav Hofierka<\/em> (4. B). V\u0161etci si zvolili vo\u013en\u00fd ver\u0161 a (mimovo\u013ene) uk\u00e1zali, \u017ee o \u0148om aj nie\u010do vedia.<\/p>\n

Viem, \u010dastu\u0161ka je tak\u00fd \u017e\u00e1ner, od ktor\u00e9ho sa neo\u010dak\u00e1va viac ako \u013eudov\u00e1 tvorivos\u0165, ale predsa, pre\u010d\u00edtajte si aspo\u0148 nieko\u013eko nasleduj\u00facich ver\u0161ov, mo\u017eno sa v\u00e1m tak\u00fdto sp\u00f4sob zap\u00e1\u010di.<\/p>\n

P. S. A v\u00e1\u0161 sloven\u010din\u00e1r bude odch\u00e1dza\u0165 nad\u0161en\u00fd, \u017ee sa mu podarilo spolu s vami \u00faspe\u0161ne prejs\u0165 cestou t\u0155nistou<\/em> od \u0161t\u00farovcov a\u017e do 21. storo\u010dia.<\/p>\n

B\u00e1sni\u010dky zverej\u0148ujem so s\u00fahlasom autorov, ich spolu\u017eiakov a \u013dudmilky. \u010eakujem!<\/em><\/p>\n

Adam B.
\n<\/em><\/p>\n

Tesne po zvonen\u00ed
\nh\u013ead\u00e1 spr\u00e1vnu triedu
\npln\u00fa cyklov a podmienok
\na vd\u00fdchne \u017eivot robotovi,
\nktor\u00fd inak len ticho sed\u00ed
\nasi ako on na hodine
\nnem\u010diny, ktor\u00fa tak ve\u013emi
\nmiluje.<\/p>\n

Keby nebolo \u0161koly
\n\u2013 ach, keby! \u2013
\nzobral by gitaru
\niPad a bicykel
\na i\u0161iel by na sever,
\nkde namiesto autobusov
\npo\u010du\u0165 len zvuk gitary,
\nsmiech
\na praskanie oh\u0148a.<\/p>\n

P. S. Ak\u00e1 bola ot\u00e1zka?<\/em><\/p>\n

Just\u00edna J.
\n<\/em><\/p>\n

\u017diaden podpis
\nby nikdy nesfal\u0161ovala
\nalebo by sa priznala
\nnefal\u0161ovane diev\u010densky
\ns l\u00e1skav\u00fdm \u00fasmevom
\na slu\u0161n\u00fdm ospravedlnen\u00edm<\/p>\n

Pozn\u00e1 viac farieb ako ostatn\u00ed
\nm\u00e1 zbierku n\u00e1u\u0161n\u00edc
\nskromne rozpr\u00e1va o kr\u00e1sne
\na s rovnakou skromnos\u0165ou
\nsa zab\u00e1va
\nspieva a tancuje
\npo\u010das dlh\u00fdch noc\u00ed \u010d\u00edta Cooka
\na s l\u00e1skou pe\u010die
\nnajlep\u0161ie b\u00e1bovky
\nC\u00edti pr\u00edtomnos\u0165 ve\u010dnosti
\nA kr\u00e1\u010da pevn\u00fdm \u00faprimn\u00fdm
\nkrokom za svojimi snami<\/p>\n

P. S. Joj, ja neviem, pora\u010f mi!<\/em><\/p>\n

Jakub M.
\n<\/em><\/p>\n

Nevst\u00e1va s v\u00fdchodom slnka
\nkr\u00e1\u010da do \u0161koly
\nakoby ni\u010d<\/p>\n

Vektorov\u00e9 polia
\na bin\u00e1rne stromy
\nzdobia jeho cestu
\npo cel\u00fd rok<\/p>\n

Po\u010duje spr\u00e1vnu t\u00f3ninu
\na d\u00fdcha do kovu
\ns frekvenciou chlapa
\npre rados\u0165 sebe aj najbli\u017e\u0161\u00edm<\/p>\n

Pote\u0161\u00ed pozdravom
\nAni po nemecky by to nebol
\n\u017diaden probl\u00e9m<\/p>\n

P. S. To je \u013eahk\u00e9!<\/em><\/p>\n

Katar\u00edna N.
\n<\/em><\/p>\n

Amb\u00edcia a nesp\u00fatanos\u0165.
\nOna d\u00e1vno bola
\nma\u017eoretka,
\nteraz vid\u00ed\u0161 kabelku na lakti
\na na poli\u010dke laky v\u0161etk\u00fdch druhov.<\/p>\n

Vym\u00fd\u0161\u013ea\u0165 obedov\u00e9 menu,
\npo taliansky,
\nstara\u0165 sa o hodv\u00e1b
\na ma\u0165 v \u010d\u00edslach poriadok.
\nHlasn\u00e9 k\u00fdchnutie,
\nn\u00e1kazliv\u00fd smiech,
\nohe\u0148 v o\u010diach
\na hlava vysoko.
\nNo oblaky s\u00fa \u010faleko,
\nbl\u00edzko pritiahne si len sny
\na vyleje srdcia mu\u017eom.<\/p>\n

P. S. P\u00e1n profesor, nemohli by sme prelo\u017ei\u0165 p\u00edsomku?<\/em><\/p>\n

Marek S.<\/em><\/p>\n

Ovl\u00e1da fyziku letu
\npl\u00e1va krajinou
\nlietadlom
\nalebo na motorke<\/p>\n

Zvuk ukulele
\na temperovan\u00fd klav\u00edr
\nznej\u00fa po chodb\u00e1ch
\nV hluchej chv\u00edli si pust\u00ed
\nkalifornsk\u00fd rap<\/p>\n

Cvi\u010d\u00ed urputne
\no du\u0161u
\nformuje telo aj ducha
\nchr\u00e1ni n\u00e1s pred u\u010dite\u013emi
\nchr\u00e1ni n\u00e1s svalmi
\na ot\u00e1zkami na hodine<\/p>\n

P. S. Bud\u00fa rezne.<\/em><\/p>\n

Katar\u00edna S.
\n<\/em><\/p>\n

Kresl\u00ed obrazy
\nfarbami jesene na pl\u00e1tno
\njej vlastn\u00e9ho sveta
\nkde slnko nikdy nezapad\u00e1
\na \u013eudia \u017eij\u00fa
\nv objat\u00ed pr\u00edrody<\/p>\n

O\u017eivuje slov\u00e1
\np\u00ed\u0161e rozpr\u00e1vky
\nm\u00e1 jemnos\u0165 a pokoj vn\u00fatri du\u0161e
\naj navonok
\nchod\u00ed r\u00fdchlo
\nale ne\u017eije tak
\nstoj\u00ed chrbtom
\nk virtu\u00e1lnym priate\u013eom
\na neoto\u010d\u00ed sa
\nlebo vie
\n\u017ee necha\u0165 sa un\u00e1\u0161a\u0165 kr\u00e1snom
\nje viac<\/p>\n

P. S. U\u017e zvonilo.<\/em><\/p>\n

Marek T.<\/em><\/p>\n

H\u013ead\u00e1 z\u00e1kony tohto sveta
\nv sk\u00famavk\u00e1ch,
\nv chemickom lab\u00e1ku,
\nsk\u00fa\u0161a, sk\u00fa\u0161a.<\/p>\n

Zauj\u00edma ho miesto, kde \u010derven\u00e9 slnko vych\u00e1dza
\nna bielom podklade.
\nTam by sedel pod kvitn\u00facou \u010dere\u0161\u0148ou
\npil \u010daj
\na skladal origami.<\/p>\n

\u00daprimne a dobr\u00e1cky sa pozrie
\ndo o\u010d\u00ed pocestn\u00e9ho,
\nzastane,
\na zasmeje sa smiechom nevinn\u00e9ho
\ndie\u0165a\u0165a,
\nlebo niekedy strie\u013ea mimo
\nalebo
\na\u017e pr\u00edli\u0161 do stredu.<\/p>\n

P. S. Ale pre\u010do je to tak?<\/em><\/p>\n

Tom\u00e1\u0161 T.
\n<\/em><\/p>\n

Na dlhom pochode
\nv Slansk\u00fdch vrchoch
\nprem\u00fd\u0161\u013ea o p\u00f4vode Chetitov
\nte\u0161\u00ed sa zo svojich priate\u013eov
\na zo svojho vl\u010diaka
\ns ktor\u00fdm sa rozpr\u00e1va o tom
\nako niektor\u00ed \u013eudia h\u013eadaj\u00fa zmysel \u017eivota
\nna nespr\u00e1vnych miestach<\/p>\n

Vytrvalo ako Nansen
\nbe\u017e\u00ed za cie\u013eom v dia\u013eke
\nbe\u017e\u00ed po zelenom poli
\nvo svojom vlastnom drese
\nktor\u00fd si u\u0161il s\u00e1m
\ntvrdou robotou<\/p>\n

Skromne rozpr\u00e1va
\no tajomstv\u00e1ch sveta
\nktor\u00e9 in\u00ed nepoznaj\u00fa<\/p>\n

P. S. Bol som u doktora.<\/em><\/p>\n

\u013dudmilka<\/em><\/p>\n

Pri \u0165a\u017ekom rozbehu
\nst\u00e1la pri n\u00e1s
\nv l\u00e1skavej
\nrozhodnej
\norganiz\u00e1torskej p\u00f3ze<\/p>\n

Nau\u010dila n\u00e1s v\u00e1\u017ei\u0165 si
\nzdravie
\npr\u00edrodu
\njeden druh\u00e9ho<\/p>\n

jej smiech dok\u00e1\u017ee
\nroztopi\u0165 v\u0161etky \u013eady
\na jemne zv\u00fd\u0161en\u00fd hlas
\nznehybn\u00ed aj
\ntr\u00e1vu kol\u00edsaj\u00facu sa vo vetre
\nJe svetlom sveta a
\nso\u013eou zeme
\nKa\u017ed\u00fd de\u0148
\nKe\u010f sa usmieva na
\nsvoje deti
\nktor\u00fdmi sme mohli by\u0165
\naj my<\/p>\n

P. S. Moji zlat\u00ed, v\u0161ak vy ste \u0161ikovn\u00ed!<\/em><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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